Kathirippu
INNALE RAATRIYIL EN VIRAL THUMBILA SPARSHANA MAADURYAM NJAN ARINJU
NIDRAYIL AA NERAM NJAN KANDA SWAPNATHIL AAYIRAM VARSHAM NAAM ONNU CHERNNU
NIN KILI KONJALUM EN HRIDAYA THALAVUM OTHU CHERNNAPPOL SANGEETHAMAYI
SANGEETHASANDRAMAM AA NIMISHANGALIL PRAKRUTHIYUM NAMMODU CHERNNU PAADI
NIN MADITHATTIL THALACHAYCHIRIKKAVE NIDRAYILEKKU NJAN AANDU POYI
NIDRAYILEPPOZHO NJANARIYATHE NEE ENNIL NINNUM VEENDUM AKANNUPOYI
NIDRAYIL NINNUMEN MIZHIKAL THURANNAPPOL KANMUNNIL NINNELLAM MANJU POYI
NJETTIYEZHUNNETTU CHUTTUM NJAN NOKKAVE GRAHICHU NJAN ELLAM EN SWAPNAMALLO
ENGILUM EN PRIYE KAATHIRIKKUNNU NJAN EN SWAPANA SAFALYA NIMISHATHINAY
Author: Georgy John
35 Comments:
Fine
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Salji
good
very beautiful lines.
nice.. nostalgic... congrats
BAZ....
Hey, John chetta,,,
Super POEMS....
Hrudayathe kulirkorum sundara ganangal thannathil santhosaham ondenikku. Enium nan kannum kothitum oru kodi ganangal mathuryamerunna.
nicccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc ur great
its really touching! John:-) i like it
Mini bangalore
itz realy touching..........
Thanks Friends.... :)
I LOVED IT
orupadu bhavanakal niranja manassu kayyilunndallo ee kavithakal enikku orupadu ishtamayi sramichal iniyum sadikkum best of luck
nin viral thumpile thoolika chalicha chandhana gandhamoorum varikalil viriyunna kavithakal hridhyamay theernnidunnu sahrudhay sadhassukail,thudaruka nin prayanam swapnangal vilkkunna manathariloode
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nannayitund..................
Kavithakal enikku valare ishtamai...
I am studying in 5th standard..iniyum kavithakal ayakanam.
BeSt Of LuCk...............................
nidrayilninnum
puthanuravode
theliyatte ennennum
nin akatharil kavibhavana..
Super.....!!!!!! Joji Chetta.............
super..........................
joji chetta...
so nice.i think u had some strong emotional feelings while writing this.waiting for something which is lost
Realy I like it jhon......
Keep it up........
Nice poem, each line has a power to guide us towards that dream world to see or to experience that ......nice .. Keep writing .......
There is a small mistake in the line “ കണ്മുന്പില് നിന്നെല്ലാം 'മഞ്ഞു' പോയി " ..correct it as മാഞ്ഞു
so that the meaning should be more clear to the audience
മഹാകവി ജോജിയുടെ കവിതകള് നന്നായിരിക്കുന്നു. Keep it up
valare nannayitundu ,REALLY SUPER
nic job enniyum ezhuthanam
kaalamam khadikaaram thachudachoren kinaakkalthan chithaabhasmamendhi.... maranamam gangayil mungi kkulichu njan enna ormayil alinju cheran enikku eshtamaanu.................................................................................... ur poems gud joji...............
Super
i like it soooooo much.....its really touching
kavithakal super..................
Ranju Haridas
super aayittundu
ranju haridas
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super
Hi Gerge, it is very good kavitha, I love and like this type of poems.......................
Thank You friends... for the encouraging words....
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